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Wedding In the Sky

I married the place where I was born at a second time,  Even today, your chest is still holding, The vibrations that become intense, When my hand touches your rim.  You acknowledge, That we've always been willing to breathe Perhaps freer among space, With fire roots around the neck, Shouted at each other silently of love, The world has ceased its existence. I am suffocating,  A distance away from me  The appearance of a different era occurs:  Of being or not. I let my Vail fall on your palms, Digging springs on my shoulders, Flemish to you.  You forgot, our marriage is bound in heaven, There is no love on the Earth!

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Date: 7/28/2023 5:32:00 AM
Your metaphors astound. Fire roots around the neck. Having trouble deciphering that one. Your last line Seems to be a statement of anguish and frustration
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2023 11:03:00 AM
Nice
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 7/28/2023 7:52:00 AM
Sure. I am Moldovan with Romanian roots
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/28/2023 6:11:00 AM
Thanks for taking the time to explain Elena. Can I ask what nationality you represent?
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 7/28/2023 5:50:00 AM
Thanks. About the last statement, it is actually a reminder about holy things. Wedding vow, being on of it. Same as saying, whatever on the Earth happens, our life is bonded in heaven. And looking up the sky, to remind that, vows in front of the God, are above the vows we give each other, day by day. With this saying, people are tempted to vow when they are happy or guilty in order to convince /prove themselves. When two people decide to get married and give a vow in front of God, it is more an assumed promise. Nor sure, if been enough explicitly )
Date: 7/27/2023 7:51:00 AM
What God has joined together, let not man put asunder. People forget that phrase in the Bible and in the wedding vows. Thanks for sharing this work with us. Sara
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 7/27/2023 9:59:00 AM
Thank you so much. Definitely, what God has joined together in the heaven, it is stronger that attempts of people to put asunder.

Book: Shattered Sighs