Wedding Day Footles

full pews
good news

bride glide
love stride

white dress
no mess

gold ring
heart sings

grand smile
bride style

love vows
heads bowed

full church
no lurch

priest waits
for mates

vows done
two one

big cake
we take

we cheer
drink beer


September 19, 2020
     6:45pm PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 11:20 AM
Hello Panagiota, this is fun to read. Hugs Da\rlene xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2020 at 11:48 AM
Hello panagiota, yes I like it. hugs Darlene xx
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Hello Darlene, Oh, good you liked it. Have a good day.. Thank you. Pamgie xx
Cunningham Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 11:50 PM
And they lived happily ever after, you're hooked I can tell lol. Tom
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 5:07 AM
I hope they did!))) So you think I am hooked? Not sure of myself when writing these. Still learning. Merci, Pangie xxx
Watt Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 9:09 PM
My goodness, you are floating in a sea of footles! So enjoyed this, Pangie. I especially loved "vows done / two one". Not to mention the celebratory quaff! Cheers, my friend!
Romios Avatar
September 20, 2020 at 5:05 AM
John, I am not a FOOTLES expert. Just learning my way. I liked several. And agree on the one you liked. Merci, Pangiexx
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace