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Wedding Day

WEDDING DAY Nothing like waking up to walking down the isle, knowing that your soon to be husband is excited. You've been waiting for this since you were a little girl, you just couldn't wait to give it a whirl. you start to get ready as your mom is there, as she sticks little pink flowers in your hair. You start walking to the entrance as your dad cries, you walk up to him and kiss him on the cheek and tell him it will all be alright. He just cant believe it that his little girl is leaving, He don't want to give you up so he keeps on weeping. you'll always be his little girl so go on be happy, just always know he'll always be your daddy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/15/2020 4:21:00 PM
Lovely poem! I just happened by and thought I'd comment on your heartfelt writing... I've been away for some time, working on my children's rhyme books. Have a great day!
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Date: 5/7/2016 8:25:00 AM
JESSICA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*
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Date: 5/2/2016 10:53:00 AM
Jessica D, NICE!!! Awesomely Penned.... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/28/2009 3:51:00 PM
Nicely done love story of a father and daughter. Is this a topic or real wedding day? If wedding congratulations on the big day. Welcome to soup. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/19/2009 12:36:00 PM
great poem. you painted a picture in my mind =)
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Date: 11/18/2009 12:20:00 PM
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Jessica. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2009 12:08:00 PM
I second Joyce's comment..this is nice and you have some nice rhymes. Look forward to reading more of your work. BG
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