Wedding Blues

Waited for this special day,
Smiles, people, open space,
Looked into your eyes with glee,
Until you said John.


By: Sabina Nicole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 10:39 PM
hahahaha. I really like this one!! congrats on the HM. I think it deserves even better!
Freeman Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Sabina, Congratulations on your poem's honored success in Dr Ram's contest. Agape, Moses
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May 17, 2011 at 2:14 PM
A lovely image, Sabine. Congratulations on your success in Dr. Ram's contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 1:21 PM
Congrats Sabina on your HM in the Wedding Rehearsal contest with this excellent entry luv.. enjoy your special honor...
Brown Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in my contest, Sabina
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April 21, 2011 at 7:25 PM
I like your poem. Sabrina,,, kinda of a set back.. on a good time... its sad how cold feet can make one slip... enjoyed,..p.d.
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