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Wedding Bells Blues

Married by a de-frocked priest [the folks didn't have a clue ] the day was mostly sunny, the geese were quaking too! My groom it seems was fretin' but my brother well [he knew ] Mary Jane was just the thing to go with cheese fondue! Pond side, down garden path the flower girl was crying the ring bearers pillow dropped the brides maids were sighing! Missing Mom finally showed, her ex in tow with tootsie what delight, what painful fright and me the raving beauty! What a day, that 26th of May I should have guessed, you know when the wedding suites' door stuck, they gave us free bordeaux.

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Francine Roberts

Date: 10/3/2012 12:25:00 AM

congrats on your win Debbie, I am really enjoying all the humorous winning entries tonight

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/2/2012 8:50:00 PM

Still laughing, sorry I know its sad too, but really... great write. I'm a little tardy getting to this contest, I think it slipped inbetween other results. Lee

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 2:32:00 PM

Debbie, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD

Len Gasun

Date: 10/1/2012 9:07:00 AM

MY HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR FRIEND, DEBBIE!!! Thank you soooo much also for making me win in your contest! Have a blessed and grace-filled day always! love and hugs:) Leonora

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 7:17:00 AM

What a super win for you. Congratulations Debbie. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/30/2012 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Debbie , nice one, hope you have forgiven me lol xx

Chipepo Lwele

Date: 9/21/2012 6:13:00 AM

Fabulous write. What a wedding!

Bl Devnath

Date: 9/12/2012 7:44:00 AM

Interesting but sad wedding memories. Thanks for your help.Loved always, bl

Daver Austin

Date: 9/11/2012 1:36:00 PM

Free bordeaux? I take it you finished things up in the hall? Pretty good way to go, high on bordeaux. Love it, Debbie. Thanx for reading my stuff. Love, daver

Karen Croft

Date: 9/10/2012 11:16:00 AM

very good wedding poem!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2012 6:48:00 AM

wow, you did awesome with the challenge here, Debs. I wish my block would "unblock" so I could think up some poems like these!!!

Tim Ryerson

Date: 9/9/2012 9:52:00 AM

Sounds like Mary Jane gave your brother a nice case of the 'munchies'??... Love this little gem, cher! Thanks for the smile this morn...Tim

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 9/9/2012 12:10:00 PM

yup that brother was a real help, my ex said I Do and pretty much left for the smoke in the parking lot..wasn't even there with me to dance the first dance? .. I can be pretty dense!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/9/2012 5:14:00 AM

Oh the vagaries in life! Nice! jimmy

Joy Wellington

Date: 9/8/2012 2:50:00 PM

A wedding day fron hell Deb|?? Well I wish mine was just that...that I could live with!! Great write as always. One love. Joy Wells

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/8/2012 7:22:00 AM

funny and clever!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/8/2012 7:22:00 AM

Yup yup I thought you all would think this was funny [nope wasn't funny!] too bad I'm so naive it takes a house to fall on me for me to see what the universe is screaming!!! Hey, I'm not a quiter 30 years I stayed more than half my lifetime at the point I left. L & L

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/8/2012 4:53:00 AM

You are indeed (verse)atile, from one mood to another, love this, Debbie, (Should one see you in a different light, or many lights? i prefer the latter)

Terry O'Leary

Date: 9/7/2012 6:59:00 PM

Funny... but maybe not at the time what with stuck doors and stuff... Terry