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Wedding Bells

All stand Eyes on door Hymn begins Groom nervous With Dad Arrives Glowing bride 09.22.2020 For Joseph May's "Paint a picture, 7 lines contest"

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2020 5:56:00 PM

That's how it looks and feels almost every time, Jo. Excellent portrayal! ~ Weddinged-out

John Watt

Date: 10/1/2020 9:16:00 AM

Back to wish you sincere congratulations on your #1 win, Jo! Well done.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/1/2020 5:31:00 AM

Congratulations Jo! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/1/2020 5:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

Date: 10/1/2020 4:18:00 AM

Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win

John Watt

Date: 9/22/2020 2:09:00 PM

Such pleasant memories, Jo, both of being a groom and a dad. Lovely lines. Best wishes ~ John

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/22/2020 8:30:00 AM

Short and sweet. ~~

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/22/2020 7:33:00 AM

Oh, you've capture that precious moment perfectly, Jo, the feelings of anticipation and butterflies.. just lovely! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/22/2020 7:26:00 AM

Wonderful imagery--you painted the scene beautifully.