Wedding Bells

All stand Eyes on door Hymn begins Groom nervous With Dad Arrives Glowing bride 09.22.2020
For Joseph May's "Paint a picture, 7 lines contest"
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Wolf Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:56 PM
That's how it looks and feels almost every time, Jo. Excellent portrayal! ~ Weddinged-out
Watt Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 9:16 AM
Back to wish you sincere congratulations on your #1 win, Jo! Well done.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 5:31 AM
Congratulations Jo! Linda
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October 1, 2020 at 5:07 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
October 1, 2020 at 4:18 AM
Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win
Watt Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Such pleasant memories, Jo, both of being a groom and a dad. Lovely lines. Best wishes ~ John
Buhagiar Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Short and sweet. ~~
Ashley Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:33 AM
Oh, you've capture that precious moment perfectly, Jo, the feelings of anticipation and butterflies.. just lovely! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Pandit Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Wonderful imagery--you painted the scene beautifully.
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