Wedding Anniversary

dressed
in
chiffon
hair a bun
with couple loose strands
solitaire around her slim neck
for Anniversary dinner at their seafood place
lost in a concoction of his adoring gaze, music, Merlot and blackened salmon 

knock
on 
the door
she answers
her knees buckle down
mascara runs down in rivers
dressed in black, holding lilies, head hung low—there stands  mom
darling,lets visit his grave before dark—mom says to flooded eyes in an ashen face


Written on:07/21/2016
Contest:'Two Stanzas-Two Only' by Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
July 26, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Congrats Sara, for your WIN with this lovely piece!! ;-)
Roper Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 7:48 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win, so heartbreaking . Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:55 PM
oh so sad Sara I didn't expect the twist at the end:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
July 25, 2016 at 3:14 PM
Fibonnaci is not an easy form to write, and these are well done. Congratulations on placing in the contest, Sara.
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