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Wedding Anniversary

dressed in chiffon hair a bun with couple loose strands solitaire around her slim neck for Anniversary dinner at their seafood place lost in a concoction of his adoring gaze, music, Merlot and blackened salmon knock on the door she answers her knees buckle down mascara runs down in rivers dressed in black, holding lilies, head hung low—there stands mom darling,lets visit his grave before dark—mom says to flooded eyes in an ashen face Written on:07/21/2016 Contest:'Two Stanzas-Two Only' by Broken Wings

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Date: 7/26/2016 6:43:00 AM
Congrats Sara, for your WIN with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 7/25/2016 7:48:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your win, so heartbreaking . Thank you so very much for your congratulations on my poem , “Free Its Soul Bound Wild Stallion”. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:55:00 PM
oh so sad Sara I didn't expect the twist at the end:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2016 3:14:00 PM
Fibonnaci is not an easy form to write, and these are well done. Congratulations on placing in the contest, Sara.
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