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Webs Around a Damsels World

From one, she has heard a thousand words but it is a familiar situation repeating the thousandth time. Her stability is much more than a bird at hand but a fantasy turned reality and hope giving the expected results. Another then gives her ten reasons to detach but unfortunately are ten more steps down his chances. More desperation from these masculine minds make them blind to run their honey-coated lips without giving heed to the signs of her sealed consent. I have a man, I’m hooked and I love him so much are phrases bouncing back from the rocky ears of these attempt makers so determined. Her resistance fights their persistence yet their hopes lose no weight the codes of their tricks, she easily decipher but lands her into the puzzle of more tricks. Marriage has sealed the deal, the abstract gate has been locked yet willing watchmen still come around with the excuse, a lady bonded by such a contract is the exact want of their devastating appetite.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/18/2016 7:10:00 PM
Love how the title leads us into the fitting story. Luckily marriage seals the deal and anything else is a knife in morality.
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:29:00 PM
Yes David Fisher... You just said it all, but unfortunately, we are in a world right now where marriage is still not that permanent lock.
Date: 1/18/2016 12:53:00 AM
Yes, life is so full of complications. Your poem really captures the tensions well. SuZ
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Suzanne Delaney
Date: 1/14/2016 11:24:00 AM
This one is very deep, and I have to admit I'm not quite understanding. She seems trapped and trying to escape the web that she's been entangled within. Marriage, mental problems..both? Your writes are always so complex and challenging to me, but I want to understand.
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Date: 1/25/2016 12:28:00 PM
You understand it fully already, trying to understand it the more is what is making it seem complex. All the web pertaining to a damsel is what is captured here and the epic conclusion centers on the fact that even marriage sometimes does not give her the needed escape route away from admirers, hunters and players alike.. Thank you for your invested time on my lines and page

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