Weaving Its Way

A leaf weaving its way
    down a flowing stream
  skitters windswept 'cross
    an autumnal lawn

  Once detached from a twig
    its life far too brief
  teasing undying belief
    ~ as green turns to grief

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Date: 11/7/2022 11:06:00 PM
last line packs a punch!
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Date: 11/5/2022 10:30:00 PM
An adventurous end, though.
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Date: 11/3/2022 11:34:00 AM
Shame I haven't a stream nearby oh well, pass the rake. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/5/2022 8:01:00 PM
By now, perhaps you need a shovel for the snowflakes. (Hope not). ~ gw
Date: 11/3/2022 10:21:00 AM
Truly, when detached, not much to hang onto. Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 11/3/2022 8:44:00 AM
Nicely-written, gw. I think this is such a compelling theme for this time of the year.
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Date: 11/2/2022 8:15:00 PM
Perchance the leaf may then ask ‘to whom does grief come, for I am not that’
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2022 8:45:00 PM
Shakespeare is smiling at you, Seeker. GREAT comment! Thanks, Gershon
Date: 11/2/2022 7:53:00 PM
Getting kinda deep there!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/2/2022 8:45:00 PM
Well, it's poetry, after all... Get out the shovel and the bucket and get back to work! lol. :) gw
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