Weathering the Storm

there is a storm deep in me
          skies turn dark within my mind
a raging tsunami begging to be free
          clouds obscure the truth to find
tidal waves crashing forcibly
          lightning strikes and i am blind
battering my body for all to see
          thunder tramples my heart to grind
pain lashes out to ignore my plea
          as winds howl and i am resigned


to my fate, 
          my life, 
                    my time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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May 19, 2016 at 2:03 PM
Germaine Elliott, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
Kiya Avatar
October 25, 2012 at 11:28 AM
good work here very simaler to my poem "to weather the storm in heaven or hell am i" have you read it ? mayap it gave you insperation?
Kearley Avatar
October 8, 2012 at 1:25 AM
Hey!!! Stay away from the Rebbecca BS! It's a scam... Just so ya know. :o)
Cheesman Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Hi Germaine, been reading a few of your poems and added u to my fav list. So whatever is going on inside, it's substance that fuels what you write. You demonstrate such a raw, open richness that I admire - Shaz
Elliott Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 12:57 PM
Shaz, thank you so much ! It's such a pleasure to know that my words have touched someone ! Yes I always tend to write my feelings out and once they have been put to pen I always tend to feel better !!! Thank you for a wonderful compliment on adding me to your faves!!!! I hope to live up to that fave list in the future !
Kearley Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 12:58 AM
Jeepers! That's really something...Nice write! Now sh#t that sucker out! Ha,ha...Sorry,I couldn't resist to make you smile. :oP
Bauer Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 3:03 PM
nice one! i like the way you've set this up and the clever way you've rhymed it.
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