Weathered

Weathered

Rain turns to snow,
Snow turns you cold,
Cold turns to hold,
Hold leads to hugs,
Hugs plant a kiss,
Kisses grows to love,
Love leads to loss,
Loss leads to pain,
Pain leaves someone
Wishing it would rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 7, 2015 at 1:40 PM
I like seeing a more controlled syllable count. It is a good write, but I do not resonate with the 'truth' that this poem finds 'absolute.' That doesn't mean it isn't good, it only means I like a little hope and faith with my pain. Still a good write ... CayCay
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