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Weathered

Weathered Rain turns to snow, Snow turns you cold, Cold turns to hold, Hold leads to hugs, Hugs plant a kiss, Kisses grows to love, Love leads to loss, Loss leads to pain, Pain leaves someone Wishing it would rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/7/2015 1:40:00 PM
I like seeing a more controlled syllable count. It is a good write, but I do not resonate with the 'truth' that this poem finds 'absolute.' That doesn't mean it isn't good, it only means I like a little hope and faith with my pain. Still a good write ... CayCay
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