Weathered

Blasts jet with resistance true
Spiking miles above my head
Raging ages surge right through
Begging me to fly instead

Pea-soup greens splash in the sky
Behind roiling charcoal force
Even angels question why
Disdain never bleeds remorse

Brace to cut torture's caress
Tremulous treads guide me on
To proudly fight doom's distress
Until flesh gets rendered gone

Piercing spikes of sand shred skin
Kicked about by tantrum swells
Wailing like a violin
Harpies toss exhaustion spells

Cartilage snaps in my chest
As my sails get torn to shreds
Earth's soil greets me back as guest
While rolling, the murk embeds

In the chaos sparks appear
Stirring up like bits of dust
To pull me away from fear
Energies consumed by trust

Lifting from my weathered shell
Up through the heart of the storm
No tears as I bid farewell
Nestled in my divine swarm
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 8:27 AM
John - Congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Christie’s contest – God Bless, MJ
Moreno Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 3:13 PM
Congraulations with your Honorable Mention...Raul
Matheny Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 1:36 PM
I wrote you. . =)
Winter Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations John on your win in Christie and Nigel's contest! Awesome write and well deserved! Love, Shar
Swanson Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 10:42 AM
Very vivid, great use of imagery. God bless and congrats on your win! :) Amy
Richards Avatar
January 6, 2009 at 8:29 AM
Well deserving to be among the winning poems! Congratulations on this wonderful poem! ~Love, Carrie
Matheny Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 7:10 PM
Thank for the comment. . Nice poem btw!! I love you!! Night. .
Faulkner Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 6:11 PM
great poetry. Piercing spikes of sand shred skin - great way of using words. once again man excellent poetry- james
Burton Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 4:54 PM
THIS IS GREAT POETRY, reminds me of edgar allan poe a little and reads so well. enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS.... [SMILE]
Payne Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 9:48 AM
The language you use in this piece is amazing, well crafted and it flows well. Wonderful write! Blessings, ~Michaela~
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 9:38 AM
Magnificent language, rhyme and flow... excellent phrasing and imagery. Well done my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Wiggins Avatar
December 31, 2008 at 9:23 AM
i like...nice write...very touching... *Breana
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