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a curtain is drawn
over the village -
hail hurtles down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:57 AM
aha, I think I arrived to the point where I last left off. I see I left a comment at this one. And by the way, hurtles was a great word choice in this one. I will double check, but I think I am caught up with your sweet poetry.
Pettit Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Makes me feel colder just reading it. After the snow last week, we have been blessed with temperatures in the range of 15-20c. Good write.
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 4:18 PM
Love the imagery in this one.
Allison Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 5:11 PM
simplicity itself. lovely write. Jan
Palli Avatar
February 16, 2014 at 10:42 AM
Excellent!
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