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Weather

Clouds breeze , wind strong

lightning flashing down in forks

rain flooding the plain

naturewaterweatherhaiku

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Skat A

Date: 7/4/2013 10:36:00 AM

lovely imagery, SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/18/2013 12:25:00 AM

You presented the image of a very stormy day on the plains. I enjoyed this.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/18/2013 3:58:00 AM

hi Andrea warm wet windy days I like I hate cold lol ty for your time Shadow x smile

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/17/2013 3:30:00 PM

you must live in the uk, especially poetry this good

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2013 3:32:00 PM

Yes Harry I do lol in the south west ty so much for comment Shadow x

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 6/17/2013 2:49:00 PM

Nice Haiku love the feeling it gave me :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2013 3:18:00 PM

Kyle ty pleased you enjoyed Shadow x

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/17/2013 12:45:00 PM

Hello Shadow, a big impact with the imagery in the weather here... love the haiku. i would love to feel that breeze... always... LINDA

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2013 3:39:00 PM

hi Linda fanning it your way lol ty for reading Shadow x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/17/2013 12:17:00 PM

we've been having heavy afternoon rains and i so relate to the wrath of lighting... your words ignite!.. well done, shadow..:) huggs

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2013 3:43:00 PM

Nette so kind ty best indoors I like watching lightening tnx for dropping in Shadow x smile

Skat A

Date: 6/17/2013 11:01:00 AM

wow! Down in forks, Shadow, i love the epic imagery in your haiku. We had scattered rains down here in Texas, about a week ago. No floods, I wish for a small one though. however we can do without the flashing lightning. An excellent haiku. , hope your enjoyed your weekend. take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2013 3:45:00 PM

Hi SKAT yes a great one ty was my grandson's 6th birthday we had a party here for him. Hope yours was good too. ty for enjoying Shadow x smile

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