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Weather

sunny day to play 
here comes the wind and cold rain 
play is now over 
 
 
 
Date Written: 6/24/2022 
How Many Syllables

5 Place

Summer Nature Themed HaikuContest Judged: 7/3/2022 
Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/20/2022 1:24:00 PM It all comes to a halt! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/22/2022 11:04:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this weather write. Rain comes and play is all gone. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Heidi Sands Date: 7/13/2022 4:14:00 PM Congratulations for your win Paula. :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/17/2022 11:17:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my weather fun write. Rain can ruin a day at play. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Sara Kendrick Date: 7/8/2022 3:07:00 AM Whoa!! Children and parent/s trapped. Put on mom's creative hat. I remember those days. Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/8/2022 8:16:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this weather write. Yes, mom put on your very creative hat or the kids will drive you crazy. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Len Gasun Date: 7/5/2022 7:13:00 AM Wow! Same weather here my dear friend Paula. I love both sunshine and rain and your marvelous haiku. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing. Have a great day. God bless you. Hugs Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/6/2022 10:26:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my write. I also love both the sunshine and the rain. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/4/2022 4:55:00 PM Back with my congrats on your cute Ku Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/6/2022 10:25:00 AM Great you came back for another visit. Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/4/2022 1:53:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Paula. Your lovely haiku reminds me of childhood and singing the 'rain, rain, go away' song. Blessings :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/6/2022 10:23:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my weather haiku write. Let's go singing the in rain. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Tania Kitchin Date: 7/4/2022 8:00:00 AM Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative haiku! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/4/2022 8:18:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your wonderful contest. Glad you like my weather haiku write. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/4/2022 4:57:00 AM Great description. Congratulations! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/4/2022 7:57:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win with this fun weather write. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day writing away......................

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 6/27/2022 5:51:00 AM Sounds very much like the weather here, we can get three seasons in one day...Delice Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/27/2022 2:55:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. The weather changes so very fast. Oh My!!!!! Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/26/2022 12:36:00 PM made me think of Washington state where I used to live. We'd head for the beach when I was really little and then the clouds would come out and we never got to enjoy the day Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/27/2022 2:54:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Tooooo bad about your beach days. The rain comes in and then we leave. Oh My!! Have a great/blessed day writing away............

Howard Kerr Date: 6/26/2022 9:37:00 AM Hello Paula, Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your recent soupmail re Son And Heir result. Your comment is truly valued by me. weather is a majestic haiku with a superb arch. Best of luck with it Warmth Howard Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/26/2022 10:21:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my weather Haiku write. Have a great/blessed~~day/week writing away............

Harry Horsman Date: 6/26/2022 1:49:00 AM Can be a spoil sport the weather, Paula, you say it all here, nice haiku, love it. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/26/2022 7:56:00 AM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love my Haiku weather write. The rain can mess up the kids playtime. Hope you are OK. Have a great/blessed day............

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri Date: 6/25/2022 10:46:00 AM A lovely day out with sushine then game over. A fine poem in brevity. Thumbs up. ^^^^^^^^^^^^>>>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<<<<~~~~~~~ Plz also read and comment on my newest poem too. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/25/2022 1:35:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this weather write. The sun is now gone and the rain is here. The rain will mess up the kids playtime. Have a great/blessed weekend............

Heidi Sands Date: 6/25/2022 8:03:00 AM It sounds like here, when weather changes in minutes! Good one :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/25/2022 1:34:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this write. Yes, the weather can change in a minute. Have a great/blessed weekend............

Sotto Poet Date: 6/25/2022 5:10:00 AM Nicely penned Haiku, Paula. Rain is always messing with kids' play plans. Have a great weekend. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/25/2022 1:32:00 PM Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this Haiku weather write. Yes, the rain will always mess up the kids playtime. Have a great/blessed weekend............