Weather

Winds rip through the valley Warping treetops bow down Writhing branches break off Winding down to the ground Whisking leaves form eddies Wrap arms round each other Whilst heaven tries to drown Pleiades W Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman Syllable counter ps 7x6 10/05/2021

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/13/2021 8:55:00 PM

Great imagery and flow in your verse, David, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/14/2021 2:09:00 AM

Heya Eve, thanks so much for kind comments, I am delighted with the placement, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2021 1:52:00 AM

- The weather is always a hot topic ... congratulations on your win, David :) - // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/12/2021 2:52:00 AM

Thank you Anne Lise Here in Ireland 4seasons in one day, quite the norm, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2021 2:43:00 PM

yes, I remember this from just the other day. Big congrats to you

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/11/2021 3:21:00 PM

Heya Andrea, delighted you remembered this one, thank you for looking in, I’m delighted with the placement cheers David

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/11/2021 1:41:00 PM

Great dramatic, description of the bad weather, David! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/11/2021 1:55:00 PM

Heya Kim I enjoyed putting this one together, easier than some of the other letters, thank you for the placement, cheers David

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/11/2021 8:44:00 AM

Hi David, back with congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades, Best Regards

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/10/2021 4:29:00 PM

Windy weather is not my favorite kind, but you wrote of it very well.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/10/2021 2:59:00 PM

Hello David Kavanagh, the wind can be strong, weak, or blow a huge wind storm. Enjoy your evening my friend. good luck in the contest.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/10/2021 1:39:00 PM

Hi David, great W pleiades about weather and all the changes we can see In just one single. I wish you the best of luck in the contest

David Kavanagh
Date: 5/10/2021 1:47:00 PM

Heya Lasaad, I am encouraged by your comment, tricky little things these Pleiades, so succinct not much leeway, cheers David