David Kavanagh Poet Verse

Weather

Winds rip through the valley
Warping treetops bow down 
Writhing branches break off
Winding down to the ground 
Whisking leaves form eddies 
Wrap arms round each other 
Whilst heaven tries to drown


Pleiades W Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kim Merryman
Syllable counter ps 7x6
10/05/2021

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Eve Roper May 13, 2021 at 8:55 PM Great imagery and flow in your verse, David, congratulations on Kim's Pleiades "W" win. Hugs Eve David Kavanagh May 14, 2021 at 2:09 AM Heya Eve, thanks so much for kind comments, I am delighted with the placement, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen May 12, 2021 at 1:52 AM - The weather is always a hot topic ... congratulations on your win, David :) - // Anne-Lise :) David Kavanagh May 12, 2021 at 2:52 AM Thank you Anne Lise Here in Ireland 4seasons in one day, quite the norm, cheers David

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2021 at 2:43 PM yes, I remember this from just the other day. Big congrats to you David Kavanagh May 11, 2021 at 3:21 PM Heya Andrea, delighted you remembered this one, thank you for looking in, I’m delighted with the placement cheers David

Kim Merryman May 11, 2021 at 1:41 PM Great dramatic, description of the bad weather, David! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M David Kavanagh May 11, 2021 at 1:55 PM Heya Kim I enjoyed putting this one together, easier than some of the other letters, thank you for the placement, cheers David

Sotto Poet May 11, 2021 at 8:44 AM Hi David, back with congratulations on your top win; you deserve it with this gem pleiades, Best Regards

Andrea Dietrich May 10, 2021 at 4:29 PM Windy weather is not my favorite kind, but you wrote of it very well.

Darlene De Beaulieu May 10, 2021 at 2:59 PM Hello David Kavanagh, the wind can be strong, weak, or blow a huge wind storm. Enjoy your evening my friend. good luck in the contest.

Sotto Poet May 10, 2021 at 1:39 PM Hi David, great W pleiades about weather and all the changes we can see In just one single. I wish you the best of luck in the contest David Kavanagh May 10, 2021 at 1:47 PM Heya Lasaad, I am encouraged by your comment, tricky little things these Pleiades, so succinct not much leeway, cheers David