Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Rhyme

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Weary Soul

~Weary Soul~ 
(Free Style) 


Where should I go? 
What should I do? 
The past calls me 
I'm long overdue 

My soul is weary 
I feel so old 
With nothing to hold 
I'm feeling so cold 

I look at the sky 
The Mallorn trees 
I look at this land 
And beyond the sea 

I have to leave you 
I'll always miss you. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2015 


-Inspired by LOTR books, movies- 


January,13,2013

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Kearra Kramer February 5, 2015 at 10:32 AM I absolutely adore the reference to the Lord of the Rings. This is really great work! I give it a seven Dorian Petersen Potter February 19, 2015 at 12:51 PM Thank you so kindly,Kearra, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "

Cherl Dunn January 13, 2015 at 9:46 AM I love the lord of the rings, and this poem does the original writter so well in his storytelling, he would have loved to read this dear girl, and maybe asked if he could put it in his book, well done, cheri Dorian Petersen Potter January 14, 2015 at 7:51 AM Thank you so kindly Cherl, my very dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. I am very humbled by your compliments. Tolkien was a great genius of a writer! Much appreciate your visit! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "

Shane Cooper January 13, 2015 at 8:44 AM Wonderful brings to mind the Tolkien verse the road goes ever on and on. Absolutely loved it thank you. Love Shane xxx Shane Cooper January 14, 2015 at 1:20 PM I also love Tolkien and Fantasy novels. love Shane xxx Dorian Petersen Potter January 14, 2015 at 7:36 AM Thank you so much Shane very dear friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! Glad you loved it. I love all the Tolkien series of books. They're awesome! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "

Demetrios Trifiatis January 13, 2015 at 4:27 AM Just follow the inner voice and it will lead you to where you suppose to be, dear Dorian! Beautiful verse and a seven! Dorian Petersen Potter January 14, 2015 at 7:39 AM Hello Demetrios! Thank you so kindly my very sweet and kind dearest friend for your very wonderful visit and comments. Much appreciated! And thanks for the 7! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D. ^O^ "