Get Your Premium Membership

Wearisome Thuds and Music Thru the Wall

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eve Roper.


                                        

Wearisome Thuds and Music Thru the Wall Brown, red, cinder walls, sounds from down the halls Walls so thin the sounds echo off the walls Woken by someone knocking on my door Hush! Listen! It’s the stranger from next door I fret and sweat, I'm so very upset Will he complain about my lazy pet? Slowly, lock my door, not making a sound Quiet snort and very slow turnaround A peep hole look beyond the door he calls With shawl over my shoulders, my pet crawls A hiding place kiddy and I to pray Good night I say that he will stay away 5/13/2016 Revised
Who's Your Neighbor Brown, red, cinder walls Sounds from down the halls Someone knocking on my door It’s the stranger from next door I fret and sweat, I'm so upset Wonder if he likes lazy pets A peep hole look was a let down Beer belly, short, dressed like a clown Quiet snort and a turnaround Lock my door not making a sound 9/8/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/21/2016 7:36:00 PM
Eve, I love the pic, it reminds me of my lazy cat, she does things like that and the second poem is my fav, wonderful 7 ~
Login to Reply
Roper Avatar
Eve Roper
Date: 5/22/2016 11:09:00 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings, I do too.Hugs
Date: 5/14/2016 9:10:00 AM
I found this piece to be highly engaging. Well done.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things