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Wearisome Thuds and Music Thru the Wall

Wearisome Thuds and Music Thru the Wall

Brown, red, cinder walls, sounds from down the halls
Walls so thin the sounds echo off the walls

Woken by someone knocking on my door
Hush! Listen!  It’s the stranger from next door

I fret and sweat, I'm so very upset
Will he complain about my lazy pet?


Slowly, lock my door, not making a sound
Quiet snort and very slow turnaround

A peep hole look beyond the door he calls
With shawl over my shoulders, my pet crawls


A  hiding place kiddy and I to pray
Good night I say that he will stay away

5/13/2016   Revised

Who's Your Neighbor Brown, red, cinder walls Sounds from down the halls Someone knocking on my door It’s the stranger from next door I fret and sweat, I'm so upset Wonder if he likes lazy pets A peep hole look was a let down Beer belly, short, dressed like a clown Quiet snort and a turnaround Lock my door not making a sound 9/8/2015
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La France Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Eve, I love the pic, it reminds me of my lazy cat, she does things like that and the second poem is my fav, wonderful 7 ~
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Thank you, Broken Wings, I do too.Hugs
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May 14, 2016 at 9:10 AM
I found this piece to be highly engaging. Well done.
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