Weakness

Weak she cradles her last breath into its bed, singing it sweat songs as the winds take it, and she falls, empty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/26/2011 8:26:00 PM
Beautiful and sensitive write, dear Ethan! Thanks for your nice comment. Best, iolanda
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Date: 9/26/2011 2:48:00 PM
Delighted to see you posted here today Ethan. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry. Love, Carol
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