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Weakness

She kissed him goodbye For the very last time She help back tears And told him she was fine She felt his hand on her skin Which was already cold She'd go without a fight Scars just a few hours old He knew it was over Only God could save her now All he could do was watch But he didn't know how Wait for me he screams But she barely hears his cries Without hesitation he grabs the blade, together they slowly dies By: Sally Harris

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 3/6/2021 3:26:00 PM
What a sad thing to read! It's good though!
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Sally Harris
Date: 3/7/2021 11:35:00 AM
Thank you.... it is a sad store. Almost a fantasy to me. Almost. Very sad.
Date: 11/2/2020 12:57:00 AM
Very moving and sad Sally, having said that, it’s a beautiful work of heart... Belle
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Sally Harris
Date: 11/2/2020 8:47:00 AM
Thank you. This cone from some kind of fantasy or dream I had.
Date: 10/29/2020 11:07:00 AM
This is very sad Sally...
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Sally Harris
Date: 11/2/2020 8:49:00 AM
It is.... Its my sadness in a story