Weak Spots Ix

The muse of a dreamy gaze,
The memory of a mutual moment,
Heightened affection and excitement, 
An intake of breath for more

The expansion of the stars
In a stretch of sky above the world,
Glimmering gently—
Affecting profoundly

A tree that casts the wanting shade
That forms its body in the day
For love to birth under its branches—
Confessions uttered and deeds done

A freshness wafting into the nostrils
Stretching beyond the tallest branch
Clouds parting with the wind's guidance
Revealing the mighty faces of the heavens 


2.9.2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Bordner Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 5:36 PM
This is a deep kind of pretty...
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January 6, 2021 at 5:01 PM
:) (:
Breidenthal Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 10:38 PM
Revisiting these weak spots warms my heart, and it warms my heart even more to share them with you. ~Laura
Bordner Avatar
January 5, 2021 at 5:47 PM
I'm faving this gem Poetess...Justin
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