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Weak Spots Ix

The muse of a dreamy gaze, The memory of a mutual moment, Heightened affection and excitement, An intake of breath for more The expansion of the stars In a stretch of sky above the world, Glimmering gently— Affecting profoundly A tree that casts the wanting shade That forms its body in the day For love to birth under its branches— Confessions uttered and deeds done A freshness wafting into the nostrils Stretching beyond the tallest branch Clouds parting with the wind's guidance Revealing the mighty faces of the heavens 2.9.2020

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Date: 1/5/2021 5:36:00 PM
This is a deep kind of pretty...
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/6/2021 5:01:00 PM
:) (:
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 1/5/2021 10:38:00 PM
Revisiting these weak spots warms my heart, and it warms my heart even more to share them with you. ~Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 1/5/2021 5:47:00 PM
I'm faving this gem Poetess...Justin

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