We Will Not Forget

"Te recuerdo como eras en el ultimo otono..."
 (I remember how you were in the last autumn.) 
---- Pablo Neruda

Dawn seems much later --
the nights much longer
than they used to be...
I am achier, and morning light 
comes tardy. Our cats and I
are in the house and you, alas, 
are not. Missing you, 
they mourn, like me,
your touch, your voice, 
lightning looks you aimed our way.  
The house, the town, the world -- 
life itself -- are emptier, lacking
your zest, the flavor of your presence --
your voice, your smell, the looks 
in your shining eyes. We will go on, 
although in ways much changed:
without your laugh, your sneer, 
flashes of your ire and then
regretful, rapid calming. 
We do, and will, still remember,
these cats, and I, and 
we will not forget.
No.  How could we?
The void you left
will not be filled and 
we will not, will not,
will not forget.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 1/11/2024 8:05:00 AM
This is so poignant Leo. Your feelings of loss for - I'm guessing - someone who was very close to you makes for a very heartfelt read. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 11/17/2023 5:57:00 PM
Still miss you Leo.
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Date: 10/28/2023 9:16:00 AM
Missing you Leo. Hope all is OK..
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Date: 6/5/2023 6:13:00 PM
bittersweet some of the memories seem to be. This is really nice writing. And I love the Spanish quote.
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Date: 6/3/2023 7:34:00 PM
Touching sentiments are conveyed in this beautiful poem on love, loss and remembrance. Great writing, Leo.
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Date: 5/24/2023 9:34:00 AM
See my blog which is a posting of an Ai generated discussion/analysis of this poem. I was amazed by it.
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Date: 4/25/2023 6:47:00 PM
Sounds like a choice: Forget-me; forget-me-not; forget-me; forget-me-not... You have made the correct choice, methinks! ~ Achy Back Club Social Director
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