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My mom passed away yesterday. We are broken-hearted. 

We Who Mourn

Blessed are those who mourn, for they will be comforted.

—Matthew 5:4

WE WHO MOURN

what death has done
to my mom -
shady.
in a comatose state,
her last breath
brings one tear
that clings to
the corner of her eye.
final hugs and kisses.
she knows we’re all there.
nothing to do
but walk away
and remember my sweetheart of a mom -
forever.

4/15/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Ligon Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 7:01 PM
So sorry to hear about your loss. Prayers of comfort.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Juliet.
Daniel Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Sorry to hear of your loss, Kim, my heartfelt condolences.. may the Lord comfort you and your family in this tough time!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 9:59 AM
Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 5:08 PM
No one loves you like your mother. I am sure she is watching over all of you. I am so sorry to hear you lost your beloved mother Kim. Please accept my deepest sympathies. Much love, Connie
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 5:45 PM
Thank you, sweet Connie.
Buehler Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:19 PM
You have my heartfelt condolences on the loss of your mom, Kim. My prayers are with you at this difficult time. May her loving memory bring you comfort. hugs, Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 8:08 PM
I just feel numb. I believe it will take a while to get to that point. Thank you, sweet friend.
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:03 PM
My sincerest condolences, Kim. Mom is simply the toughest loss there is. May she rest in peace now, and may you be comforted in the long days, weeks, and months to come. Time to Remember and Mourn, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Thank you with all my heart
Ball Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 2:34 PM
So m any people think people in a coma don't know anything but they do. I believe they can hear but can't speak or move. I'm sure the tear was because she was unable to tell you goodbye an that she loved you. She knew you were there. My deep condolences in your loss. God Bless my friend and know that now she is free. JB
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:20 PM
I think she knew that all her children had come one by one. There are no words... Thank you
Boreham Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 11:07 AM
((((((((( KIM )))))))))) You are Very strong, caring and intelligent. I am truely sorry for your loss. Am thinking of you and sending much much love. If I were there right now- I'd give you a big big hug <3
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:20 PM
I’ll take that hug!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Kim, I am sorry to hear this; it is a horrible thing. A terrible experience, even though we believe in Heaven, it is such a loss! You have my prayers my friend. Your last line is incredibly right.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 4:20 PM
Thank you!
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 5:14 AM
My thoughts and prayers go out to you and your family, Kim. Nothing to do but to walk away--and remember--forever... so well said, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 7:36 AM
Truly! Oh boy was my mom loved! Thank you
Logan Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:29 AM
Oh, Kim, I am so sorry to learn of your Mom's death. My Dad passed in the same way. My thoughts are with you as you honor her memory is this poem. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Thank you
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 3:48 AM
aww Kim i am so sorry for your loss, this is such sad news my friend:-( hugs jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Thank you
Summers Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 11:35 PM
Kim, my condolences to you and your family at this difficult time. You are in my thoughts and prayers. John
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 10:55 PM
I am so sorry for your loss. Your dear mother is now in a better place. We who are left behind will know some heartache. Time heals slowly, but she will never be forgotten. See my soup mail please.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Soup mailed. Thank you, Victor.
Y. Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 9:20 PM
I am so sorry for your loss, Kim. My condolences to you and your family-Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:49 AM
Thank you
Agustin Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:59 PM
Our Lord knows perfectly what's best for us. You are in my prayers. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Thanks, Beata. I was on FB and two times in a row I came across “ Blessed are those who mourn, for they will be comforted.” — God speaking to me. <3
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Heartbreaking, Kim. My sympathies. I'm so sorry ~ Hugs xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Thank you, Line.
Merryman Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 8:37 PM
I'm so sorry about your mom, Kim. Praying for you and your family. Blessings, Kim M
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2021 at 4:51 AM
Thank you.
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