We Walked Away

its been a long journey and we have come a long way
moved far apart, the busy life always holding sway
the little world we had within ourselves 
gradually destroyed by the real world's harsh ways
we fought, we ventured, we won, we lost, 
we waited and we drifted apart
amidst the cold winds the cherished beliefs did sway
the wounds taped over, the tears long dry
on a face marked with fake smiles,
we learned to compromise;
cold friendships forged, need of the hour met
companions many, confidant none
the eyes searching for the other 
the solace amidst all the chaos
the sanity among the insane
reminiscing the days of carefree banter, 
secrets shared, duels fought, each having the other's back
we both climbed from the opposite ends,
no longer in touch,consigned to mere thoughts
finally reaching the top, scarred and bruised,
hesitant to speak, scared to acknowledge the other
was it us that changed? Was it the world?
An involuntary smile said it all.. 
the small world still intact , thoughts still pristine
the far fetched dreams intact , words flowed freely, 
childlike laughter echoed, 
lauding the other's success, 
shedding silent tears at the pain the other went through
A lifetime lived in an hour,
a kingdom won amidst the rubble 
A single thought crossing the mind
what if we had faced it all together?
What if only we had believed?
What if we had not walked away?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/30/2015 11:50:00 AM
Most of the stuff is so true
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Date: 10/5/2015 5:14:00 PM
Sauvik, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2015 3:10:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Sauvik :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sauvik Sarkhel
Date: 10/5/2015 6:11:00 AM
thanks a lot
Date: 10/4/2015 3:52:00 PM
Sauvik, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Sauvik Sarkhel
Date: 10/5/2015 6:24:00 AM
Thanks a lot .. SKAT.. really appreciate the encouragement. I am 28 years of age. Born and brought up in India. Have been in the marketing field for the past 4 years post MBA. currently working with Amazon, recently shifted to Bangalore from Gurgaon. I like to spend my spare time travelling and reading books. Love adventures. I also like to pen down my thoughts which somehow take the shape of poems. Have been writing for the past 6 years. like to make friends and gain new experiences.
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