We Two

lips and thighs quiver

   at the heat induced by

       we two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Nice one, Francine, and my saga will continue when I can figure out how to do the second part to fit the box. I think I will end up having to do three parts to that fool story geeez.
Fringe Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:48 PM
Wheh! I'm getting excited :)
Loving Iii Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 8:11 AM
short and sweet. john
Lindenmuth Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:27 AM
wipinmg the sweat off my brow after reading this, and then i cooled down. Nice write
Johnson Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 4:43 PM
oh dear dear, im feeling queer, nah just getting hot:) bit steamy Francine
Foulk Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:56 AM
a lovely Senryu. thank you for commenting on Lilac's At Home
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 5:29 AM
Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Francine. It is a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 7:01 PM
Sensuous and passionate..enjoyed.
Muzzey Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 6:29 PM
A beautiful write Francine, very sensual. I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Mehta Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 6:23 PM
Very sensuous, Francine
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