We Two

lips and thighs quiver at the heat induced by we two

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/2/2011 2:07:00 PM

Nice one, Francine, and my saga will continue when I can figure out how to do the second part to fit the box. I think I will end up having to do three parts to that fool story geeez.

The Fringe

Date: 6/30/2011 7:48:00 PM

Wheh! I'm getting excited :)

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/29/2011 8:11:00 AM

short and sweet. john

Bill Lindenmuth

Date: 6/29/2011 5:27:00 AM

wipinmg the sweat off my brow after reading this, and then i cooled down. Nice write

Don Johnson

Date: 6/28/2011 4:43:00 PM

oh dear dear, im feeling queer, nah just getting hot:) bit steamy Francine

James Foulk

Date: 6/28/2011 10:56:00 AM

a lovely Senryu. thank you for commenting on Lilac's At Home

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/28/2011 5:29:00 AM

Enjoyed reading the words that flowed from your pen today Francine. It is a pleasure to see and read your poetry. Hoping you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 6/27/2011 7:01:00 PM

Sensuous and passionate..enjoyed.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 6/27/2011 6:29:00 PM

A beautiful write Francine, very sensual. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/27/2011 6:23:00 PM

Very sensuous, Francine