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WE SIP HER MOMENTS

Poem submitted to ILLUSKA: Illustrated Haiku Challenge Poetry Contest, JCB Brul, sponsor, 7/24/2025

*WE SIP HER MOMENTS
summer sails on seas
of sparkling lily laughter
we sip her moments

*Note: I published this poem at Poetry Soup on June 9, 2025. (www.poetrysoup.com › poem › we_sip_her_moments_1738034) then deleted it.  Am re-sharing it now.  This is my original poem

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Line Gauthier Date: 7/26/2025 5:13:00 PM charming ~ Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 7/23/2025 3:25:00 PM I'll have a glass or two. :-) Bill Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/23/2025 5:58:00 PM You've provided me with 'gallons' of moments! I'm grateful, hugs, me

Paige Hind Date: 7/22/2025 6:54:00 PM Very "refreshing" - :) Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/23/2025 5:58:00 PM thank you! hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/22/2025 9:39:00 AM Great alliteration. Well constructed haiku. Thanks for reading my poem. Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/22/2025 5:24:00 PM awww, thank you Victor. Glad to be in touch again. I'll continue reading your poems

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/22/2025 7:56:00 AM Lovely write! Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/22/2025 9:12:00 AM thank you, sweet Kim!

Anne Winter Date: 7/22/2025 6:15:00 AM Dear Sara, I really enjoyed this haiku, so beautifully written! Love this! Best, Anne Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/22/2025 9:12:00 AM awww, I appreciate your kind comments. Grateful you loved it. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Tom Woody Date: 7/22/2025 5:19:00 AM Enjoying life... one sip at a time. Nice Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/22/2025 9:12:00 AM thanks for visiting and for commenting. enjoy your day

Yann Rolland Date: 7/22/2025 4:41:00 AM just delicious "instantané" ( french word), now i am sipping an armagnac, looking at Le tour de France, thanks poet for inspiring me Login to Reply Sara Etgen-Baker Date: 7/22/2025 9:11:00 AM just delicious comments! thank you! glad to inspire you...enjoy Le tour de France. enjoy your day