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WE SIP HER MOMENTS

Poem submitted to ILLUSKA: Illustrated Haiku Challenge Poetry Contest, JCB Brul, sponsor, 7/24/2025

*WE SIP HER MOMENTS
summer sails on seas
of sparkling lily laughter
we sip her moments

*Note: I published this poem at Poetry Soup on June 9, 2025. (www.poetrysoup.com › poem › we_sip_her_moments_1738034) then deleted it.  Am re-sharing it now.  This is my original poem

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Line Gauthier July 26, 2025 at 5:13 PM charming ~

Bill Baker July 23, 2025 at 3:25 PM I'll have a glass or two. :-) Bill sara Etgen-Baker July 23, 2025 at 5:58 PM You've provided me with 'gallons' of moments! I'm grateful, hugs, me

Paige Hind July 22, 2025 at 6:54 PM Very "refreshing" - :) sara Etgen-Baker July 23, 2025 at 5:58 PM thank you! hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar July 22, 2025 at 9:39 AM Great alliteration. Well constructed haiku. Thanks for reading my poem. sara Etgen-Baker July 22, 2025 at 5:24 PM awww, thank you Victor. Glad to be in touch again. I'll continue reading your poems

Kim Rodrigues July 22, 2025 at 7:56 AM Lovely write! sara Etgen-Baker July 22, 2025 at 9:12 AM thank you, sweet Kim!

Anne Winter July 22, 2025 at 6:15 AM Dear Sara, I really enjoyed this haiku, so beautifully written! Love this! Best, Anne sara Etgen-Baker July 22, 2025 at 9:12 AM awww, I appreciate your kind comments. Grateful you loved it. Have a pleasant day, Sara

Yann Rolland July 22, 2025 at 4:41 AM just delicious "instantané" ( french word), now i am sipping an armagnac, looking at Le tour de France, thanks poet for inspiring me sara Etgen-Baker July 22, 2025 at 9:11 AM just delicious comments! thank you! glad to inspire you...enjoy Le tour de France. enjoy your day