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We Shall Go On

Road to Conviction Lips kissed so tender hands held to heart My mind racing Oh how did I get here? I answered and let you in You spoke and I trembled Sweet thereafter come near Color so rampant Across my vision Invades this space Heart so free Race to the meadow Green and fresh Sweet smell lingers My thoughts as pixels Paint the canvas unclear blue and red wildly thrust upon my breast I will recall As charming ladies do The feeling and longing We shall go on Athena Charlotte

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/12/2016 9:19:00 PM
ATHENA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/6/2009 12:17:00 PM
Athena, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:05:00 PM
Beautiful write. Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:20:00 AM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2009 7:41:00 PM
Athena, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
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Date: 9/22/2009 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on getting featured this week!
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Date: 9/22/2009 10:26:00 AM
Awesome write here, Athena. Love the "my thoughts as pixels" line ... smile ... beautifully done and a well-deserved selection to be a feature this week here at PoetrySoup. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/22/2009 6:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Athena, nice write>>James
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Date: 9/21/2009 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 9/21/2009 6:12:00 AM
Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you Athena! Adeleke
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Date: 9/21/2009 3:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Athena. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2009 6:58:00 PM
Athena, what a lovely name you have! And your writing compliments it. Thanks for sharing this tender work. Carolyn
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