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Is it Okay to Hand Feed Birds? – More Birds

We See What We Want See

 
One day when I was walking in the park, an old man was feeding birds from his hand; as I stepped closer to make a remark, birds fluttered about me- like a dreamland. He smiled at me giving me some bird seed, placing many seeds in my open palm; he said the birds think he has the best feed, I gave it a whirl trying to be calm. The vision of the man and birds was sweet, I never forgot that moment in time; now, I too go to give the birds a treat, this man and his birds was a gift sublime. "And the birds twitter like whispering violins." Quote - by Constance ___________________ May 29, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/We See What We Want See Copyright Protected, ID 05-1359-933-29 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, We See What We Want To See sponsor, Daniel Turner, Judged 06/09/2021 Third Place
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Alex Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 9:42 AM
Yet, another great work. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 2:05 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, peace _Constance
Leffanta Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:00 PM
There is a town called, "Bird in Hand" but Trump closed their Post Office ......
La France Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:16 PM
Rico, thanks for the visit and comment, peace _Constance
Hankins Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 5:58 PM
Fine writing, to be sure. I loved it, Constance. The old man taught you one of life's most important lessons.
La France Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 12:17 PM
Milt, thank you for the visit, yes the old man did, and thanks also for the compliment, appreciate, peace _Constance
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Hello Constance, this poem has a calming effect when I read it. A beautiful poem of a man feeding a bird. Love Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Hello Constance, yor welcome my friend. Love.Darlene
La France Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 3:58 PM
Darlene, thank you for the comment and compliment, love _Constance
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