We See It Now

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Space flickers, revealing white light If we pause to blink, we’ll miss it God’s blessings, bestowing clear sight Signals we are at the summit When void-centric becomes our view Space flickers, revealing white light Within form, as bliss throbs renew Rapturous is our heart’s delight Suffused with joy, by day and night Unending’s our meditation Space flickers, revealing white light The source of all of creation In heart resounds, soundless thunder The truth of oneness, now shines bright We behold in childlike wonder Space flickers, revealing white light 23-April-2022

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Karam Misra

Date: 5/4/2022 6:17:00 AM

Profound, and beautifully written! I loved the way you've connected the infinite and boundless expanse of space with the space within oneself - boundless thunder of the heart. And that there is a light in the void, as there is hope within the heart. Thank you for the beautiful poem, Unseeking Seeker.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 5/4/2022 7:56:00 AM

Thank you, Karam. I’m so delighted that you enjoyed the write, God bless