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We Sank Into Rain

I felt among the tired stars for you among the frozen banks of ice and blue and soon the rushing wind came weeping with weary tones aching echoes of the world I felt with burning hands for you in twilight mist of eucalyptus churning clay in waves of red with trembling fingers nearly dead frail in the face of the sun I felt inside my twisting heart for you in brittle bone-shards shattered white and reaching deep I found your pulse in ancient forests standing silver in sprouting green and gasping sky in ever-growing vines of life I found you with golden moonglow in your hair and softly we sank into rain

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Date: 5/7/2016 4:27:00 PM
Alec P , nice to see this poem in Justin's contest. *skat*
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Date: 3/20/2016 12:01:00 AM
Alec, nice to see your poem got an HM on Justin's latest contest. HUGS ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/2/2016 12:24:00 AM
Alec,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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