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We Sail

WE SAIL We Sail No, Bail! Shark tail Full scale Ocean’s calm sea, we sail. No, bail! Splash! Cruel, cold steel eyes. Shark tail! Full scale slash! Kim Rodrigues © 2017 Tyburn Form

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Darren White
Date: 3/17/2017 12:00:00 AM
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Wow, Kim! What a powerful (and scary) Tyburn! And that form you wrote it in is magnificent.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2017 7:12:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Darren!
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Doug Vinson
Date: 3/16/2017 10:26:00 PM
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Kim, a violent dislocation from what the reader may think upon seeing only the title. : ) "Tyburn" makes me think of Olde England, even of Roman Londinium, or was that pre-Roman, even pre-Celtic? And - 2, 2, 2, 2, 9, 9 syllables - who comes up with this stuff?!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2017 11:09:00 PM
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I don't know, Doug...lol! I enjoy a little misdirection...hehe

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