We said things we didn’t mean to, right?

We said things we didn’t mean to,
right?
I mean, it was just in the heat of the moment
and we were both a little frustrated.
You expressed how you felt,
like I never listen to you and
I asked if you’d pass the bread.
You called me self-centered and inconsiderate
and I replied you could care less about my needs.
When I asked if you were going to finish
your pasta, you looked at me 
for a few moments, shook your head 
and said you’d had enough. 
That’s when you got up and left. 
I had no idea you were full.

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Date: 7/20/2024 12:55:00 PM
A thought provoking piece Rich .. relationships can be challenging at the best of times and sometimes we can listen but not hear but what I need to know is did you eat the left of pasta - i hate waste !! hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2024 8:29:00 PM
Lovely write enjoyed reading your poem many blessings
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Richard Colbert
Date: 7/20/2024 9:56:00 AM
Thank you, Yolanda
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