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We Raise Them Up

Today we sing great joy we bring To those sweet souls words long forgotten For just a while we take them to a peaceful magical place a place they knew a place they loved a place to put smiles on their face Even those who do not speak whose memories faded long ago They’ll sing along inside their heads the words they used to know And as the music starts to play deep inside a memory stirs As slowly they will rock and hum before the words begin to come And by the time we reach page two they sing along with me and you ‘Blue Moon’ ~ we sing ~ oh how they swoon ‘Delilah’ ~ ‘Lean on Me’ ‘Sweet Caroline' ~ they start to move it really gets them in the groove We sing with gusto they smile with joy As memories return when girl meets boy Our last rendition our final song Full of joie de vivre the choir and me We start to sing ‘You Raise Me Up’ I start to cry ~ I don’t know why it always makes me cry… We raise the roof our souls entwine they almost touch the sky Our spirits smile with exultation to cheers ~ applause ~ a celebration For today we really made their day and they have made ours too Monies sent to Parkinson’s UK we pray a cure is found one day We bid them farewell ~ We wave them goodbye I'm so blessed to be part of this choir It is food for my heart each time I take part With lovely friends who like me have “P” Singing together in our Parkinson’s choir I feel truly alive ~ I feel almost on fire… Written 12th February 2020 I wrote this today after a performance by our Parkinson’s Choir, where we entertained some delightful folk who are living out their final days within a care home. It was truly inspirational… Contest Strand Select M Sponsor Brian Strand HONORABLE MENTION Poem is in the 2nd Anthology Contest 1299 Sponsor Brian Strand

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Date: 9/23/2021 8:10:00 PM
Back for another read Ann, I can hear the applause after you read this out. Enjoy every minute. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/23/2021 9:49:00 PM
Thank you dear Tom, I am so excited and have been awake for hours... with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 9/23/2021 2:08:00 PM
I came back for another read. As inspirational as a poem can be. All will go well when you perform live. My very best to you Ann. Enjoy the honor!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/23/2021 2:26:00 PM
Bless you dear Vijay and thank you. I will let you know how it went...
Date: 2/26/2021 6:43:00 PM
What a truly moving and inspiring poem. Awesome, Ann ~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/28/2021 2:16:00 AM
Thank you dear Line, it was such a joy to see the smiles on the faces of these lovely folk, who often were in their own world, but the power of music clearly triggered some wonderful memories for them as they sang along with us ~ I loved it. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/15/2020 12:22:00 AM
What a beautiful piece expertly penned Ann, this a wonderful work you do, it must bring joy and gladness to those who listen and sing along. Have a blessed weekend, Blessings always,Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/18/2020 11:01:00 AM
Bless you dear Gordon for your lovely comments. Singing with the Parkinson's choir is so rewarding and it truly uplifts my soul - I love it! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/13/2020 7:35:00 PM
Lovely tribute to life, Ann. Most appreciated.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/14/2020 12:17:00 PM
It is truly wonderful being a part of the Parkinson's choir and hopefully when we sing we enable the audience to feel uplifted too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/13/2020 11:21:00 AM
Dearest Fellow Piscean, A gorgeous poetess, an outstanding woman. Your poetry is like you...REAL! You are a giving woman in life and your Poetry sings of love. No matter your difficulties, you share both adversity and overcoming it. How I admire you,Ann. Panagiota xxx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/13/2020 2:06:00 PM
Bless you dear Panagiota, for your most beautiful words, I am truly overwhelmed by your kindness and thank you so much. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/12/2020 2:21:00 PM
Aww Ann I know how much you you bring through your singing and how uplifting it is for the choir, whenever I hear you raise me up I think of you xxx:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/12/2020 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Jan, the line that always gets me is 'I am strong when I am on your shoulders' that is when I go, that is when my tears begin to flow... hope all is well Jan. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/12/2020 1:44:00 PM
This is so beautiful Ann--it should be poem of the day. You indeed raised the roof for them and the reader.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/12/2020 2:04:00 PM
Dearest Vijay many thanks for your beautiful comments dear friend. We certainly raised that roof today. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/12/2020 1:36:00 PM
Wow Ann, this is amazing. So inspiring! A favorite for me. Congratulations for your singing in the choir :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/12/2020 2:03:00 PM
Bless you dear Heidi. It was such a wonderful day I had to capture that moment! Thank you too for the Fav... With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 2/12/2020 12:40:00 PM
What a lovely thing to do Ann, Im glad you had a wonderful day. Tom
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/12/2020 1:05:00 PM
Many thanks Tom, it was a really great day for us all! I hope you had a good one too. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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