We Need a Nice House

How can we find the house we need,
There are thousands on the market.
It shouldn’t be so hard to do
We’ve cash aplenty to get started!

What about this? It’s really great,
It’ll suit us just quite fine:
The kitchen is a tadge too small,
Not much room for guests to dine!

The garden is a masterpiece 
Of superlative delight:
Dig, cut and plant throughout the year,
We’ve both now taken flight.

The next viewing took our breath away,
It was truly Master class:
The only drawback we could see
Were gypsy horses on the grass?

We tried another place, real cool;
It had all we could desire!
When we emerged from this viewing
Our car had lost its tyres.

We’re not saying there’s nowt out there,
But WOW it sure is tough:
Perhaps we ought to compromise?
No, you can; I’ve had enough!!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 6:58 AM
ha love it ,you have done well here and I hope oyu find what you are looking for xx
Davidson Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 7:48 AM
I wrote it for someone else Mandy but thank you for your comments.
Andresen Avatar
January 20, 2013 at 6:58 AM
A house with a lot of enjoyment - Nice poem to share. - Have a fine Sunday .... - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Davidson Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise for your fine comments. I wrote this for a couple who have been searching for some time now. They don't seem to be able to agree, ah sad.
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