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Image 2 - Pierre Édouard Frère French Painter - Under My Umbrella

Voices Constes Sponsored by Eve Roper 09/13/24

 

I'd borrowed Pa’s umbrella to shelter from the rain, alas one spoke is now broken I’m scared that Pa’s will go insane! My best friend Jacques was with me when there was a sudden squall, I tried to hold onto the umbrella but it crashed hard against a wall. So Jacques is walking by my side and he will take me to my door, he’ll tell Pa HE broke the umbrella - he’s covered my back once before! He knows Pa’s got a terrible temper but Pa is friendly with Jacques dad, who is the senior village policeman so Pa won’t dare do anything bad! I’ve not told my Pa my secret Jacques is my first boyfriend, he won’t let my Pa cause trouble on Jacques I can always depend.

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Date: 9/24/2023 8:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jam. I love the spice you added to your poem. Jacques. :) always nice to have a friend like him. Many blessings to you
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Date: 9/24/2023 4:07:00 PM
An enjoyable poem. So light and interesting.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/24/2023 5:08:00 PM
thanks Hilda xx
Date: 9/15/2023 5:27:00 PM
So well done, Jan! A touching story about two umbrella's, if Jacques is considered one, too.
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Date: 9/15/2023 5:33:00 PM
Jacques is definitely protective! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/14/2023 10:47:00 PM
Awww Jan….how very sweet and beautiful! you have a lovely heart….Is he now your hubby? And not a poop in sight hehe!! Cuddles….Debx
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Date: 9/15/2023 2:37:00 AM
yes amazing no poop for a change, i will mail you about hubby xx
Date: 9/14/2023 8:24:00 AM
How sweet the tale of you and Jacques. At least your writes don’t give me a saccharine overload like some I can no longer read, for fear of sugar poisoning.
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Lin I too feel an overload of sugar too. hugs jan xx
Date: 9/13/2023 8:32:00 PM
A friend is invaluable in so many ways. Lovely write, JA. :o)
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 9:51:00 AM
thanks AP:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/13/2023 5:51:00 PM
Now that is true love.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/14/2023 9:50:00 AM
thanks Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/13/2023 2:25:00 PM
A truely romantic story.
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Jan Allison
Date: 9/13/2023 3:32:00 PM
thanks so much, its rare for me to write in this style:-) hugs Jan xx

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