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Image 2 - Pierre Édouard Frère French Painter - Under My Umbrella

Voices Constes Sponsored by Eve Roper 09/13/24

 

We Must Talk In Hushed Voices

I'd borrowed Pa’s umbrella to shelter from the rain, alas one spoke is now broken I’m scared that Pa’s will go insane! My best friend Jacques was with me when there was a sudden squall, I tried to hold onto the umbrella but it crashed hard against a wall. So Jacques is walking by my side and he will take me to my door, he’ll tell Pa HE broke the umbrella - he’s covered my back once before! He knows Pa’s got a terrible temper but Pa is friendly with Jacques dad, who is the senior village policeman so Pa won’t dare do anything bad! I’ve not told my Pa my secret Jacques is my first boyfriend, he won’t let my Pa cause trouble on Jacques I can always depend.
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Roper Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 8:26 PM
Congratulations on your win, Jam. I love the spice you added to your poem. Jacques. :) always nice to have a friend like him. Many blessings to you
Greenhough Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 4:07 PM
An enjoyable poem. So light and interesting.
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 5:08 PM
thanks Hilda xx
Fisher Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:27 PM
So well done, Jan! A touching story about two umbrella's, if Jacques is considered one, too.
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 5:33 PM
Jacques is definitely protective! Hugs Jan xx
M  Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 10:47 PM
Awww Jan….how very sweet and beautiful! you have a lovely heart….Is he now your hubby? And not a poop in sight hehe!! Cuddles….Debx
Allison Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 2:37 AM
yes amazing no poop for a change, i will mail you about hubby xx
Lane Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 8:24 AM
How sweet the tale of you and Jacques. At least your writes don’t give me a saccharine overload like some I can no longer read, for fear of sugar poisoning.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:53 AM
Thanks Lin I too feel an overload of sugar too. hugs jan xx
Brotherton Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 5:51 PM
Now that is true love.
Allison Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 9:50 AM
thanks Jerry:-) hugs Jan xx
Situation Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 2:25 PM
A truely romantic story.
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 3:32 PM
thanks so much, its rare for me to write in this style:-) hugs Jan xx
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