We Met To Write

We met to write as we sat down on the beach My heart beating, two to each other teach Writings we shared writing various themes When our eyes met, connection now streams Into the evening we walked, closer we became Chatting away our nerves becoming tamed Our hands in gentle touch, slightly brushing Her eyes now sparkling, cheeks blushing Openly laughing jesting, bravado increases Capering hugging antics, pleases Eyes now finally meet, sighs before Lips now gently greet, hearts now soar Then! .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 6:55 PM
READ THE SECOND ONE FIRST... THIS PRELUDE IS FANTASTIC . A solid 7 again my friend...
Fraser Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 1:46 PM
Thank you Robert, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:29 AM
aha aha aha!! so you are making us guess huh!! an open ended poem.. :D weee!
Fraser Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:11 PM
Weeeeeee little one, James :)
Chircop Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:23 PM
To be continued ? : )..Ow gee..A beautiful sweet romantic poem,the Then in the end is a killer !!
Fraser Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Thanks kindly Charmaine, James :)
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:12 PM
Great poem James. I can see two young students in their young innocence.
Fraser Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:05 PM
Many thanks Brenda, James :)
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:10 PM
then... her hubby appeared from behind a tree kicked me in the nuts now I'm hopping like a flea ..... I think you better write part 2 James! :-) Hugs jan xxx
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:31 PM
Great minds Tim I originally wrote and now I can no longer wee - hugs jan xx
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:26 PM
bahaha....can't you see...I can no longer pee and I sing like Mariah Carey
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