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We met in a spring

We met in a spring when she came in a wind Soothing like a song is how her eyes tend With our hands tied, we kept reading our mind Being together & loving each other was the trend Between the hearts we walked the lane of wedding Dawn was never coming, Dusk went never ending Every second made a moment, days were like occasions I felt sunset only when, she got upset between lines We wrote the meaning for loving Sweet like a honey was our living Uncommon was nothing Until egos came clashing Egos stood like a mound; else all came like his dude Bits and parts of heart were poured with hatred Today munching of the spring, ego go dissolved “Now, who will bring the spring?” I plead to the lord

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/2/2009 12:07:00 PM
Chandru, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 2:02:00 PM
Just dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2009 8:10:00 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Classiq! Adeleke
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Date: 8/28/2009 5:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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Date: 8/27/2009 11:46:00 AM
I like your poem. There is no question why it was featured. The love described here is so beautiful and the loss of it is definitely felt.
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:31:00 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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Date: 8/24/2009 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 8/24/2009 4:10:00 AM
Congratulations on being. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Classiq. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:58:00 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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Date: 8/23/2009 5:04:00 PM
Interesting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:36:00 AM
So many lines in this write I read twice. Love your descriptions. Really nice work Classiq.
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