We Met In a Spring

We met in a spring when she came in a wind
Soothing like a song is how her eyes tend
With our hands tied, we kept reading our mind
Being together & loving each other was the trend

Between the hearts we walked the lane of wedding
Dawn was never coming, Dusk went never ending
Every second made a moment, days were like occasions
I felt sunset only when, she got upset between lines

We wrote the meaning for loving
Sweet like a honey was our living
Uncommon was nothing 
Until egos came clashing

Egos stood like a mound; else all came like his dude
Bits and parts of heart were poured with hatred
Today munching of the spring, ego go dissolved
“Now, who will bring the spring?” I plead to the lord
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 2, 2009 at 12:07 PM
Chandru, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 2:02 PM
Just dropping by to add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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August 29, 2009 at 8:10 AM
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem, worth featuring..; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Classiq! Adeleke
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August 28, 2009 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James
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August 27, 2009 at 11:46 AM
I like your poem. There is no question why it was featured. The love described here is so beautiful and the loss of it is definitely felt.
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August 24, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Congratualtions on being featured this week! Wonderful poem! ~Trudy~
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August 24, 2009 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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August 24, 2009 at 4:10 AM
Congratulations on being. Keep writing. Sara
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August 24, 2009 at 3:17 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Classiq. Love, Carol
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August 24, 2009 at 1:58 AM
congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
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August 23, 2009 at 5:04 PM
Interesting view in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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April 6, 2009 at 3:36 AM
So many lines in this write I read twice. Love your descriptions. Really nice work Classiq.
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