We Met

I met you just today, At an unexpected time, And we talked. I shared with you today, Sweet memories of joy, And we laughed. I walked with you today, On crowded streets, And we rested. I wined with you today, Dark eyes across the table, And we touched. I left you just today, ‘Twas the sweetest farewell, And we parted. I remembered you today, Soft eyes in the sunset, And I cried.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Austin Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 4:32 PM
I like the form idea. Congrats. daver
Ruff Avatar
January 6, 2014 at 6:19 AM
Nice use of strategic repetition and effective ending.
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January 5, 2014 at 9:12 PM
William, .... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. A nice way in starting the year:)- Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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January 31, 2012 at 2:31 PM
Full of emotion and brilliantly written. Very touching.
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