We Melded Hearts

We melded hearts a loving way,
With rings exchanged as we did say
I do, I do beneath God’s eye
While, through your veil, I watched you cry
Young tears of joy, our wedding day

When, on my arm, with bright bouquet,
We marched as one, to never stray,
Secure to feel precisely why
We melded hearts

So long ago, before hair gray
And children grown from tots at play
To strong adults who verify
We’ll deeply love until we die;
A love, content, that does convey
We melded hearts.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/20/2017 10:52:00 AM
Your Rondeau speaks excellence...Wonderful to share the winners’ list with you...Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2017 5:39:00 AM
A lovely write, David, congratulations:)
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David Bose
Date: 11/14/2017 1:23:00 PM
Thanks, Jo, I appreciate it. Dave
Date: 11/12/2017 3:48:00 AM
A touching write David, well written.
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David Bose
Date: 11/14/2017 1:16:00 PM
Thanks, James. It just came to me fairly quickly. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again, Dave.
Date: 11/12/2017 12:15:00 AM
Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest, David. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 11/14/2017 1:15:00 PM
Janice, I'm sure it's easier to enter a contest than to sponsor one, so you deserve many, many thanks. You chose a challenging form I enjoyed, and I'm honored you thought so much of my work. Thanks! Dave
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