We Kept the Coat As a Reminder

We Kept the Coat as a Reminder
She was gloriously nondescript
Her eyes glazed over with a crusty face
Pink eye? We asked each other
None of us knowing
We are not doctors

She had a headache
But no one knew
We could not have guessed
And we did not care
Recognizing this, she kept silent.

We let her into our Sunday School Class.
Her coat was smelly, mothy, old and ragged.
Two women ran to get their coats before hers met the rack.
I thought they were rude.
No. I knew they were rude.

They have been rude a long time.
Two prudes.
Two rude sister prudes.
The stranger stayed the whole time.
She did not look over at the two prudes.
Not one time.
She left being as nondescript as she came in.
We never saw her again; but she left her awful coat.
We keep it as a reminder to try to be nicer next time.
In case she was Jesus in disguise.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Hankins Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Another winner. I need to tell you about the time I met Jesus standing on the stoop of the church when I was leaving to go to lunch. I was the only person in town who met Jesus that day. It was really strange!!!!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Nothing strange about it my friend; it was meant.
Hawkins Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 12:37 AM
I loved this Poem....
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Thank you Shirley. I had no idea where it was going until BAM it went.,
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