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we took it for granted life as we knew it our freedom our future the concept of fairness karma and justice and then it was stripped in one quick painful motion flayed off like a bandaid before our very eyes revealing the ugly truth of the worst of mankind now all we can do is pray for a mighty Hail Mary ~ AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2025 Posted on February 24, 2025

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Date: 2/25/2025 2:04:00 AM
And sadly it’s going to fester Line. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 2/24/2025 9:46:00 PM
Very well expressed, loved this.
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Date: 2/24/2025 9:40:00 PM
Prophetic and oh-so-painful. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/25/2025 2:23:00 PM
praying for a Hail Mary ~

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