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We Had a Storm This Morning

We had a storm this morning Effervescence light above the roof Big fat raindrops coming On my shoulders if I ventured too close Sometimes refreshing to clear the air Other times the wind slams shut the door I never know which it will be Until it ends and the turbulence calms There could be a storm coming again soon I have to wait and see which way Will she be ready to right past hysteria Or blame the lightening for the rain
6-20-2020

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Date: 6/21/2020 10:17:00 AM
Nice choice of words to describe your storm...
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Date: 6/20/2020 11:28:00 PM
Great imagery and metaphor for life in this wonderful write, Jeanne! I hope your storms pass and your summer is bright and sunny. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/21/2020 2:12:00 AM
They can't be denied...just gotta weather them, lol
Date: 6/20/2020 8:56:00 PM
I must admit a big storm is awesome to watch, the power of nature. Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/21/2020 2:12:00 AM
The one this morning was awesome and it's been months so was extra nice
Date: 6/20/2020 5:15:00 PM
You bring back my life in the Midwest, all too well, thank you.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/21/2020 2:13:00 AM
'D
Date: 6/20/2020 3:20:00 PM
This includes some hidden meaning! Storm after storm! Be blessed!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/21/2020 2:11:00 AM
You caught that! Heading right into I think.

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