We Had a Storm This Morning

We had a storm this morning Effervescence light above the roof Big fat raindrops coming On my shoulders if I ventured too close Sometimes refreshing to clear the air Other times the wind slams shut the door I never know which it will be Until it ends and the turbulence calms There could be a storm coming again soon I have to wait and see which way Will she be ready to right past hysteria Or blame the lightening for the rain
6-20-2020
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June 21, 2020 at 10:17 AM
Nice choice of words to describe your storm...
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June 20, 2020 at 11:28 PM
Great imagery and metaphor for life in this wonderful write, Jeanne! I hope your storms pass and your summer is bright and sunny. Blessings to you, Rhonda xx
Mcgee Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:12 AM
They can't be denied...just gotta weather them, lol
Cunningham Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 8:56 PM
I must admit a big storm is awesome to watch, the power of nature. Tom
Mcgee Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:12 AM
The one this morning was awesome and it's been months so was extra nice
Romios Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 5:15 PM
You bring back my life in the Midwest, all too well, thank you.
Mcgee Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:13 AM
'D
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2020 at 3:20 PM
This includes some hidden meaning! Storm after storm! Be blessed!
Mcgee Avatar
June 21, 2020 at 2:11 AM
You caught that! Heading right into I think.
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