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We Go Deeper Still

without any
strings attached
lets go
deep into thy
brother's soul
where this domain
is what God
controls
and then
we go
deeper
still unto
the service
of God
to know
this is
the only
way to
the
kingdom of heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A   Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 8:08 PM
a lovely write,enjoyed this one,..p.d.
Del Fierro Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 5:21 PM
so true,if only it were that easy...once we can let go of selfishness,we may be capable,as you have well written....peace , jay
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