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"we Don'T Lose the War, We Just Make It Silent"

War Boom, boom Die, die Your the target so better hide fast Your the star So run faster We want you now Better be quiet But put your weapon on your side I promise i'll make it very quick Now relax girl Don't move The war has just begun Place weapons on the side Close for a fist Now use that power for more blood No more tomorrow Make it today Because today Will be yesterday So yesterday you were the hero Now we have gone For? A nice brutal kill History have not bound us War Silent war No sound No bullets No blaze Dead? We still stand Help us all No chance of purity Help yourself No war Because you don't hear it? Oh brother your mistaken again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/15/2010 12:16:00 PM
a unique, style my friend, awesome write,'
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:30:00 AM
Dereck, you write like you know war first hand good job!!
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Date: 9/24/2010 6:23:00 AM
Really like the fast-paced meter, Derek. It adds power to your message about war. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 10:57:00 AM
It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Derek. Thank you for sharing your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:41:00 PM
enjoyed reading rtoday...welcome to poetry soup and stop by and read some of my poems if you feel lucky.
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Date: 9/22/2010 4:09:00 PM
great write loved it thank you for kind remarks sarah x
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