We Daffodils

WE    DAFFODILS


We are the brightest best-loved first-borns of God’s flower children,
Hear our golden trumpets’ clarion call. Our sunny mouths whisper
With nodding heads.We chatter among ourselves like market women. 
Gladness-filled,we stand erect, the tallest, smartest, like serried soldiers.

Our tender tips were cold in the snow; the smiling sun now warms our lips.
Our swaying golden bells of heaven - of God’s orchestra the brass section -
Playing to the overhead budding leaves and the slow-rising tulips.
Hearty, open-mouthed, laughing at the sun to attract his warm affection.



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Written by Sydney Peck  27 February 2012

Entered in Francine Roberts's contest "Pusywillows or daffodils"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 6:37 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 1:44 PM
Wow! I love the way you give human life to the daffodils as they nod their heads and chatter. Awesome work, Syd. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on this winning piece I would have placed it higher xx
Onclaud Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 12:16 AM
KC, you are on a roll; whoo!.. happy congrats on your stunning win :) huggs
Roberts Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 11:58 PM
congrats on your 4th place win Syd, great job on the personification
Roberts Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 5:19 PM
line 5 check for typo
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