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We Chased a Star Around the Moon

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He waits for me in my dreams each night I hear his soft neigh when he catches sight of me. I am only a tiny little slip of a girl who sits on his back as we travel the world. Into the stirrups then up to saddle of gold. Around his powerful neck, my arms enfold. A few times we circle while the music plays. Up and down we gallop with blacks and grays. "Hold on tight," he flicks his tail and we fly off the carousel, all the way up into the sky. Around the back of the moon, we chased a star. Up and down all night, we journeyed afar. Down to the meadow to greet the morning sun. My carousel stallion and I have so much fun. I've been holding on to his thick mane all night, but now the sun is up and shining so bright. We've been flying for hours; time to come down, I promise to try my best not to frown. It's time we return to your place at the park, I'll be back in my dream when it's grown dark. Handsome stallion of white, on my carousel, where we go on our fantasies, I will never tell. * * * * * * * * * * February 24,2016 What Goes Up, Must Come Down Contest by: Catie Lindsey

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Date: 2/26/2016 4:21:00 PM
Well you remember what I once told you about minds. You have once again read mine! A fabulous ride into your imagination. Will you ever grow up? Really nice, Peaches. I look forward to seeing it again in the winners circle with a horseshoe of roses. Peace dear lady:)
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:26:00 PM
To quote Peter Pan, "I don't wanna grow up.." lol Thanks, Danny.
Date: 2/25/2016 2:02:00 AM
Lovely. When you close your eyes tonight, I hope you'll fly again.
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Date: 2/26/2016 4:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mark. I appreciate the visit and the sweet comment.
Date: 2/24/2016 12:19:00 PM
Well-done, Lady - I enjoyed reading this so much. Both the content and rhyme scheme drew and held my attention, and I sure enjoyed the 'ride' ... CayCay
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thanks so much, CayCay. There are other horses...come along one night.
Date: 2/24/2016 8:33:00 AM
Nice one Lin, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/24/2016 12:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jeannie.
Date: 2/24/2016 7:24:00 AM
Ah I used to love carousel's...and I love your rhyme Lin(good luck)...do they still have them?...or have they turned it into an app lol...^WW^
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Date: 2/24/2016 11:59:00 AM
Thank you, WW. They DO still exist in many places, and still a wonderful place for reveling in fantasy.

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