M. Shahid H. Chouhdry Poet Ghazal

We Care

In extreme mob, with suspiration and tear,
I am here to wipe off, because I care,

For the pain andworries that may turn you sear,
Don’t worry, I am here to aplomb, because I care,

In trouble and indepressive delusion veer,
My smile, will vanish all, because I care,

You may unaware and in fear,
No matter, how it goes on, listen I care,

For ailment to sorrow and grief ere,
Spell the right,leave it to say I care,

In edgy situation,you won’t able to hear,
I whisper heart to heart, because I care,

Each remedy to final intervention till you wear,
I will not leave you alone, because I care,

And until you faith,contented and swear,
I keep on my efforts, becasue I care.

Shahid Hussain
Chouhdry

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Sara Kendrick November 3, 2013 at 4:53 AM Enjoyed reading your work..I like the repeat phrase of "we care"...I have tried to write a few Ghazal and they are not that easy..Sara

Wahab Abdul October 31, 2013 at 9:43 PM you have written a good poem , enjoyed ...

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 28, 2013 at 5:41 AM Excellent rhyming, inspiring poem! Way to go!

Debbie Guzzi October 27, 2013 at 6:21 AM Interesting way to present what traditionally is presented in couplets. So as a contemporary ghazal you have abandoned all but the repeated phrase, the radeef [we care] interesting. Light & love

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2013 at 2:52 PM Shahid, well done ! - // Anne-Lise :)