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We Care

In extreme mob, with suspiration and tear, I am here to wipe off, because I care, For the pain andworries that may turn you sear, Don’t worry, I am here to aplomb, because I care, In trouble and indepressive delusion veer, My smile, will vanish all, because I care, You may unaware and in fear, No matter, how it goes on, listen I care, For ailment to sorrow and grief ere, Spell the right,leave it to say I care, In edgy situation,you won’t able to hear, I whisper heart to heart, because I care, Each remedy to final intervention till you wear, I will not leave you alone, because I care, And until you faith,contented and swear, I keep on my efforts, becasue I care. Shahid Hussain Chouhdry

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Date: 11/3/2013 4:53:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..I like the repeat phrase of "we care"...I have tried to write a few Ghazal and they are not that easy..Sara
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Date: 10/31/2013 9:43:00 PM
you have written a good poem , enjoyed ...
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Date: 10/28/2013 5:41:00 AM
Excellent rhyming, inspiring poem! Way to go!
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Date: 10/27/2013 6:21:00 AM
Interesting way to present what traditionally is presented in couplets. So as a contemporary ghazal you have abandoned all but the repeated phrase, the radeef [we care] interesting. Light & love
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Date: 10/26/2013 2:52:00 PM
Shahid, well done ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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