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We Can'T Survive Without 'Em

In God's fertile earth the American farmer casts the seeds, To grow the grain to meet the hungry world's needs. From the good earth springs forth a bountiful cornucopia, Of good things to feed the starving in places such as Ethiopia! Oft I have pondered who discovered the essential element of fire. Was it a cave person who witnessed the lightning setting a tree afire? "Warm" thanks to the feller who burned his fingers to keep an ember alive! Sans fire to warm our feet and broil our steaks, how would we survive? We know not from whence cometh the wind nor whence it goeth! But how we relish the soothing sound of a zephyr as 'mongst the trees it floweth! In ages past, billowing winds drove sailing ships across the raging seas. Today, wind power is so useful as other energy sources it doth ease! Water, water everywhere but is it pure and safe to drink? Mankind must save it from pollution, you would really think! From the operation of the mighty Hoover Dam to a single glass of water, 'Tis necessary for our survival and we must conserve it - we really oughter! We've squandered our precious rescources over the course of time. Perhaps 'tis time to rethink the matter or our lives won't be worth a dime! Entry for Barbara Gorelick's "The Four Elements" Contest

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Date: 8/16/2010 6:57:00 PM
Great entry, Bob. Outstanding write. Good luck. Ralph
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Date: 8/15/2010 5:57:00 PM
Good luck in the contest, and you are right we can not survive with out them,, or our ways and self,, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:37:00 PM
Bob, I'm having some computer problems. Spent the night having new virus software installed. Today my sound system is not working :( I'd love to hear the Ashokan song, though, and will as soon as it's fixed. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:02:00 PM
Bob thank you for your kind comments, always makes me smile.. All the best for Barbara's contest with this great entry, love Wilma
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Date: 8/15/2010 1:37:00 PM
Bob, You put thing plain. I too wonder when the cave man come into play. I can't quite figure it out in my mind. Good luck on your entry to the contest. A good one. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:32:00 AM
hi robert good to see you still writing wonderful poetry good luck in the contest best wishes to your wife I suffer from lattice degeneration I had lazer sugery but that was only to hold my eyes from falling off the back wall if fell I would have been blind for the rest of my life but it didn't correct my vision more lazer can damage progress done not willing to take that chance thanks for your support faleshia
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Date: 8/14/2010 5:52:00 PM
A wonderful entry to Four elements contest showing the stark reality of the day, Bob. I think you don't good luck. it is written all over
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:36:00 PM
Bob, it is both a rhyme and a series of quatrains followed by a couplet (as the contest requested). I think you should just call it rhyme -- because it does! Love ya, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2010 3:00:00 PM
Excellent quatrain on the elements, Bob. I especially enjoyed the "warm thanks" you offered to the caveman who kept the lightning-struck tree's fire alive. Did you ever see the movie "Quest for Fire"? You summed it up so nicely. And I love the way you tied the message together with the couplet at the end. Best wishes for success in Barbara's contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/14/2010 1:36:00 PM
Super duper write Bob ..good luck in BG's contest on the four elements.. powerful piece should do so well..u are on a great roll my friend..enjoy it..with luv..
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