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We Can Change the World

It's up to you and me
    ~ let our dreams soar



Ziket: a 2-line poem comprised of 5-8 syllables in 1st line, 5 syllables in 2nd line

AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Gilmour Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 11:41 PM
Wow... a strong image for sure. I really like this form Line. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 6:50 AM
Thanks, Ann. Much appreciated.
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 5:27 AM
what a super example Line i have never heard of this form thanks for bringing it to my attention:-) hugs jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 8:20 AM
Thanks, Jan. I find it's most effective in combination with a visual element, but should not depend on it to carry it through ~
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