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Dear reader, as I sorted the catogorys for This write..Of which lets say there were Not going to be many' the screen shifted As i was in the ( G boxes ) so instead of Pushing the God choice i stabbed grief As the first box..I reflected.? And then i Ticked God, Some events at 5am for you to consider..?

We can '

Hey can do's..' How do we do.? Just your
Ruminent here' Kangeroo... Who Watched
Old Elon gettin carried away...Who's a different type of ' colonial yet of an ilk' from
Contact culture could be hey.? He bounded around..Note that..' Yet don't make fun of me.!! LOL))) Hyped on the election win and all that American humans could be..' And right then at that very (point.?) I felt a soberness hit.' Or appear somwhere that I
Call my gut i suppose.? And mars.. 
I observed just what was it.? He had a glow.? And certainty
A godlike type of aura.' Whats there to hate? And i'm not irate.) Yet I glimpsed maybe ( the road to hell ) And i've been in my past another maker..? Look on this I rather not dwell.' I'm sure I felt a sadness and it? Hmm?..Well I beleive it came from God...It was a feeling of..Or? Knowing His
Shoulder turned, as a parent who felt the
Rub..? Of that child in a crowd of others whom could all do it on their own..Against
The ( maw of a yawing eternity ) a chill came into my spiritual bones.. And in the
Realisation i really
Felt alone.)
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:37 PM
still processing what seems to be a fairly complex, layered poem.
Maverick Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:47 PM
Its how as i feel? Or see it in humans make Some good things systems etc Sara..Yet When it becomes expected to worship the fruits of the work.. Thats time to question Yourself..' And get outta there.'
DiMino Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 11:13 AM
Great people, hate small talk. Read for information, but prefer just to sit and think, alone with their thoughts. In the presence of being, God. Sad that Canada is turning more toward communism...it has not worked anywhere before, will only hurt Canada, yet history repeats itself. Europe lost their individual cultures...a shame. Ruling class more like insane religious fanatics. Australia on the cusp. USA Trump led government attempting a return to good traditions for all...corrupt Marxists (sanctuary cities and states) rebelling, afraid their criminality will be exposed. In short, a world mess.
Maverick Avatar
January 25, 2026 at 12:28 AM
Is it not written.? Some Prophets have Written lies in 'My Name' Joe Dimino.?So be strong in Love is my impetus.'
DiMino Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:55 PM
Trump is anything but a politician. So, in that respect we are safe. Sometimes I believe there are only two kinds of people in the world, those who want to tear down existing everything, for personal ambitions and control...and those who want to tear down everything to prove that the Lord is Coming, see, he will end the world as we know, killing all the evil doers. As far as trust goes Joe, I do not even entirely trust those who collated our great religious books. Who may have interjected, here and there, some of their own sly inferences. My personal feelings on the subject of trust.
Maverick Avatar
January 24, 2026 at 1:42 PM
Dear ' Joe Dimino ' I can't find any grounds To trust politicans..Specially the ones with mid range or large parties My summation being at that point..They get Infiltrated I watch pauline hanson in Aus.. She speaks pretty good yet she still operates under Canberra's instruction? As far as I read things.'
Dietrich Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 10:17 PM
This is hard for me to understand. Maybe I do? Not sure!
Maverick Avatar
January 23, 2026 at 11:49 PM
Its a refection as far 'as my capabiltys allow' on how much We see, we can 'do things' as God enables us.'or do we do them in as being our own gods?.small 'g' There has allways been something of this In Australia and the USA from the 50s on to the 70s i reckon To the point Australia & the USA & Canada were seen as a type of paradise by other lands..Yet how far we take it is a different thing...Maybe its just me? I think european Nations got to a similar point recently.? Yet now.?)
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